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Suddenly, You're Here

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I was tormented for your life.
Scared you may die because of my strife.
Scared that you would come to me as your siblings had before.
Leaving my heart empty, my dreams broken, my soul tor

But suddenly… my child you’re here.
And I can’t seem to shed a tear.
I feel no more anger, no more loss, nor pain.
Merely my young heir born into my rein.

Oh child, my dear sweet child
Your eyes are happy and your heart is wild.
My dearest you are strong, you are smart.
And I regret your life of parents apart.

But your eyes look at me with love unable to yield.
Eyes so beautiful, colored like an ashen grass field.
With them you see not the pain I’ve caused or the lives I stole.
But you see a father with a good heart and a strong soul.

You are my new start.
The thing I will not part.
You dear child of my own.
With my strength and your mothers tone.

I’ll always be here.
So hold fast to me Shenandoah dear.
You will be great one day, you can never fail.
My newborn sweet princess of Vale.

So sleep now, knowing that I am near.
Because sweet child, you are suddenly here.
3 out of now 4 poems down. :P

A marvelously stolen title! Because its about a picture of the same name! You WANNA FIGHT!? COME AT ME KING SCRUB I'M RIPPED!! :la: :la:

So this one was based on this picture which is definitely one of my favorites of all :icontazihound:'s works -> tazihound.deviantart.com/art/S…

So ya! This one and the Vren one definitely my favorites! I loved them soooo much! And this one in particular was amazing! I love Shenandoah! She is adorable and her personality in the RP is really interesting! I wish I could draw and join DoTW so bad but alas I’m stuck at that part. ^^;

 

So ya, as a whole this piece was oddly beautiful. I wrote it from Ren’s PoV, and though I started with his dull tone I really started reading between the lines of the RP and looking at Tazi’s art. I felt it was a bit off character, but at the same time Shen seems to completely re-shape him as a character. He is compassionate and loving as a father. I feel for her sake he regrets a lot of things, but where she doesn’t know his faults, she is able to love him with as much passion as he has for her. It’s beautiful and I love it! If it’s too wrong then I’ll take it down, but I think this is completely right! :D

 

I love this RP, thankyou Tazi and Tama for this wonderful story and wonderful opportunity to write for you. Happy holidays!

 
Shenandoah (c) :iconwildfire-tama:
Ren (c) :icontazihound:
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darkwolf190's avatar
hay man good poem i have you ever wright a story and delted on axadint and it have over 3k words