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Only See Black

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Who knew by laying together silently,
That you would come for me so violently?
Leaving my friend a lifeless husk
There upon that starless dusk.

Your words of love falling away hollow,
Breaking my heart with events that follow.
You looked on completely care free.
Claiming what you did was all for me.

Our bright future now left so dim.
Leaving me to hide away from them.
“What have you done?” “Why this way?”
You go to answer but you need not say.

Dear fowl Ren, Our past I grieve,
For feeling as I had, so naïve!
You were right Renier, you were right all along.
You can only hurt, like a brutal love song.

So leave me here with these pups and air of his scent.
I’d trade my alpha back for your love that I resent.
I saw you in my wildest dreams upon the chill night air.
But now we are together, only in my dreaded nightmare.

I know you’ve felt the pain of loss and dread.
But after my faults, I feel I deserve to be dead.
Perhaps I am wrong, perhaps I am right.
But I can only see black on this darkest of night
2 down, 1 to go!!! And the next one has puppies in it!!! Kinda. Once again fan art things! Cause I want to show my appreciation for all the heart break and happiness that Vren has caused me! :heart:

Gotta say I prefer Wren's PoV over Renier. :/ Idk why, I just click better with her emotional ways and words. This one is sad. I've been sad all week because of this one.

This poem is highly based off this image by both :icontazihound: and :iconwildfire-tama: ->wildfire-tama.deviantart.com/a… as well as the RP's that go along with it. Honestly why can't everyone be happy!? :( *sigh*

This has been fun! THese are much easier to make than full chapters luckily!

Hopefully the last one will be out tomorrow! See you then! ;)

Wren (c) :iconwildfire-tama:
Ren and Faust(c) :icontazihound:
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Once again, you've done amazingly! You captured Wren's perspective SO well, as always. Like every angle you have covered. Her despair and betrayal and just hopelessness! You have such a way with words, I love how easily you can make the verses flow and rhyme. I just love reading these so much. Knowing that I am not alone suffering through her pain, since I know a lot of effort and emotion has to go into writing a beautiful poem like this, as also helped me through as well because it is pretty exhausting as I am sure you know!

Anyway, thank you so much! I really appreciate these <3 They made me so happy every time <3